Category: Singles Spit Swap
There is a lady somewhere in the land,
I don't know her and she doesn't know me.
The secret is someday i'll have her hand
Maybe she is blind maybe she can see.
One day I will meet this precious jewel,
Some day I will hear the call from above.
Sometime soon i'll even act like a fool.
Then when I'm not looking I'll fall in love.
The wedding will be so merry and gay,
Relatives many and friends not a few
Celebration is the name of the day
All topped off with a wondrous I love you
Then there will be such love wonder and bliss
Memories locked in each and very kiss
The years have gone by in a blinding flash
Now the children have families of there own
And the grandkids are eating porridge mash
Proudly we have reaped all our seeds once sown.
Now in our golden years resting in shade
All too soon now our sun will flicker out
Never over the years did our love fade
Surely we are soul mates there is no doubt
You hold a piece of me and I of you
high in soaring clouds together we fly
The fact is we are one not merely two
not can make part no trick treason or lie
for so lovingly melded is our heart
I love you you love me never to part
Now I lay me down to sleep in our death
Even in this aftermath we are one
I can still feel her soft caressing breath
I still see her smile radiant as sun
Now you might be asking how can this be
God chose us for each other out of time
Before creation we were meant to be
Together our hearts are a perfect rhyme
I look back on a life very well spent
and look forward to an eternal rest
I truly love you my dear heaven sent
Cherished one you always bring out my best
a love so amazing a love so pure
I truly can't wait until I meet her
Absolutely incredible.
Wow that is really good. Man you need to give that to any woman that is intresting I know it would win my heart if I was single. Smiles Keep up the great work there is a great woman just for you.Hugs
Oh wow!!!! That was amazing!!! You'll find that someone out there one day!!!
Hey, good job. I am sure if you give that to the right girl, she'll really like it. Good luck finding that special someone.
tthat was wonderful smile. hugs.
Aww! That was sweet! Very pretty I hope you find the right one soon!
I'm half and half about this to be honest.
while some lines are quite lovely some of the rhymes honestly make me cringe a bit...
wow I like it. but then I'm kinda weird about liking obsessive poetry. Nice job.
That was wonderful.. great job.
Interesting work, sir. But just out of curiosity doesn't this more or less belong in writers block? Like I sed, this is sweet and heartfelt but perhaps finding a wife on the zone bbs may or may not happen.
Hmmm, sounds like something I'd hear in a pretty love song. Perhaps you should write a melody for it and present it to your future wife when you propose? Very very nice.